Detective’s Story

Rene Almendarez
5 min readMay 7, 2023

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Detective Jake was feeling frustrated as he drove to the crime scene. He had been working on a difficult case for weeks with no luck, and he was starting to feel like he was hitting a dead end. But when he arrived at the scene of the latest crime, his instincts kicked in.

The victim was a wealthy businessman named Charles Wilson, who had been found dead in his mansion. The cause of death was unknown, but the house had been ransacked, suggesting a robbery gone wrong. As Jake surveyed the scene, he couldn’t help but feel like something was off. The whole place was too neat and tidy, as if someone had carefully cleaned up after the crime.

He walked through the house and inspected each room. Nothing seemed out of place, except for a broken vase in the living room. It looked like it had been knocked over during a struggle. But there were no signs of forced entry, and the alarm system hadn’t been triggered.

As he began to ask questions and interview witnesses, he started to piece together a theory. He suspected that the murder was an inside job, carried out by someone the victim knew and trusted. He focused his attention on Charles Wilson’s wife, Sarah, who had been out of town at the time of the murder. She seemed genuinely shocked and upset by her husband’s death, but Jake had a gut feeling that there was more to the story.

He also spoke to the housekeeper, Maria, who had been the one to discover the body. She was clearly shaken up and had a hard time giving a coherent statement. But Jake noticed that she kept glancing at her phone, as if waiting for a message or a call. He made a mental note to follow up on that later.

As the day wore on, Jake found himself more and more convinced that this was no ordinary robbery gone wrong. The killer had been careful and deliberate, leaving no evidence behind. But there was something about the crime scene that didn’t quite add up, and he was determined to figure out what it was.

Over the next few days, Detective Jake worked tirelessly on the case. He interviewed every person who had been in contact with Charles Wilson in the weeks leading up to his death. He reviewed security camera footage from the mansion and analyzed every piece of evidence he could find. But despite his best efforts, he was no closer to solving the mystery.

One day, while he was sitting in his office, Jake’s phone rang. It was Sarah Wilson, Charles’s wife. She sounded frantic and desperate, begging Jake to meet her at the mansion as soon as possible. He agreed and drove over right away.

When he arrived, he found Sarah pacing back and forth in the living room. She was clearly distraught, and Jake tried to calm her down. She eventually explained that she had found a note in her husband’s desk drawer that seemed to suggest he was having an affair. She was convinced that the note had something to do with his murder.

Jake was intrigued. He asked Sarah to show him the note, and she handed it to him with shaking hands. It was a short message, written in a woman’s handwriting: “Meet me at the usual place. 7 pm, Friday.”

Jake immediately saw the potential significance of the note. He asked Sarah if she knew who the woman might be, but she shook her head. She had never heard of her husband having an affair before.

Jake’s mind raced as he tried to figure out what to do next. He knew that the note could be a valuable clue, but he also knew that it could be a red herring. He decided to investigate the woman who had written the note and see if she had any connection to the murder.

As he left the mansion, Jake couldn’t shake the feeling that he was getting closer to the truth. He was more determined than ever to solve the mystery and bring the killer to justice.

Jake spent the next few days tracking down the woman who had written the note. He combed through phone records and social media profiles, trying to find any connection between her and Charles Wilson. Finally, he found a lead: the woman, named Samantha, had worked at one of Charles’s companies several years ago.

Jake decided to pay Samantha a visit. He found her working at a coffee shop and struck up a conversation. She seemed nervous at first, but Jake put her at ease and eventually got her to open up.

Samantha admitted that she had written the note to Charles, but she claimed that it was innocent. She had met him at a conference a few weeks ago and they had exchanged business cards. She thought he might be interested in hiring her for a project, so she sent the note to arrange a meeting.

Jake was skeptical but decided to follow up on Samantha’s story. He contacted Charles’s business partners and discovered that there was indeed a new project in the works. He also discovered that Samantha had been a rival bidder for the project, which made her a potential suspect.

Jake went back to Samantha and asked her to come in for questioning. She agreed, and Jake spent several hours grilling her about her connection to Charles Wilson. She stuck to her story, but Jake noticed that she seemed nervous and evasive.

As he was driving home that night, Jake’s phone rang. It was Maria, the housekeeper from the mansion. She sounded frantic and said she had important information about the case. Jake agreed to meet with her the next day.

When Jake arrived at Maria’s house, she was visibly shaken. She told him that she had found a hidden camera in the living room of the mansion. It had been recording the whole time Charles had been killed, and she had made a copy of the footage.

Jake rushed back to the station and immediately started reviewing the footage. What he saw shocked him: the killer was none other than Sarah Wilson, Charles’s wife. She had staged the robbery to cover up the murder and had even cleaned up the crime scene to make it look like a robbery gone wrong.

Jake arrested Sarah and charged her with murder. As he sat in his office, looking over the evidence, he felt a sense of satisfaction. The case had been difficult, but he had finally cracked it. And he knew that Charles Wilson’s family and friends would finally have some closure.

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Rene Almendarez

Fiction writer (mostly). I choose a writing prompts. I tried to write it into a story. Whether it's good or not, I published it.